Thursday, November 18, 2010

Wish you called me back...

Wish you called me back...

Wish you heard me say...

In these lonely hours that I spend today...

I wish you got me what all I lacked.


Yeah, I long for your touch...

And I fear to loose you but I cant do much.

Now I know I cant be waiting...

Need to move on and loose the ring.


Years have passed,

Lights have gone dim,

A broken glass and a bottle of gin,

I still see your shadow and thats all that lasts.


They told me it would never work out

But I still believed and had a reason to say...

Now all thats left is the fading away day.

And I still hope that one day , that one day you would hear me loud!


Wish you called me back...

Wish you heard me say...

In these lonely hours that I spend today...

I wish you got me what all I lacked.

8 comments:

  1. oh this i like :) very very good
    god bless
    take care
    Janne :)

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  2. Hi Janne,
    Nice to read you compliment.
    I am glad you liked it...
    Thanks.. :)
    God bless you too..

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  3. Namaste Rahul
    i shared this beautiful poem in my blog :)
    I like your writing very much :) but i think you know by now :))))
    blessings from Norway
    Janne

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  4. Namaste Janne,
    Thank you for sharing my work with your friends. I hope they like it as well. :)
    I am glad you like my writing. :)
    Hehehehe....Hmmmmm

    Thank you for the blessings. God bless you too...
    Any plans to visit India?
    Rahul Atrishi

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  5. :) hei :)
    i have no plans to visit India for the moment unfortunately :) But i would like to change our climate :)))) Norway is very cold at the moment
    :)) Haribol

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  6. Hehehehe...That is nice....It is quite sunny here. :)

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  7. Hi Deekay,
    I am glad you liked it.
    Thanks. :)

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