Wish you called me back...
Wish you heard me say...
In these lonely hours that I spend today...
I wish you got me what all I lacked.
Yeah, I long for your touch...
And I fear to loose you but I cant do much.
Now I know I cant be waiting...
Need to move on and loose the ring.
Years have passed,
Lights have gone dim,
A broken glass and a bottle of gin,
I still see your shadow and thats all that lasts.
They told me it would never work out
But I still believed and had a reason to say...
Now all thats left is the fading away day.
And I still hope that one day , that one day you would hear me loud!
Wish you called me back...
Wish you heard me say...
In these lonely hours that I spend today...
I wish you got me what all I lacked.
oh this i like :) very very good
ReplyDeletegod bless
take care
Janne :)
Hi Janne,
ReplyDeleteNice to read you compliment.
I am glad you liked it...
Thanks.. :)
God bless you too..
Namaste Rahul
ReplyDeletei shared this beautiful poem in my blog :)
I like your writing very much :) but i think you know by now :))))
blessings from Norway
Janne
Namaste Janne,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing my work with your friends. I hope they like it as well. :)
I am glad you like my writing. :)
Hehehehe....Hmmmmm
Thank you for the blessings. God bless you too...
Any plans to visit India?
Rahul Atrishi
:) hei :)
ReplyDeletei have no plans to visit India for the moment unfortunately :) But i would like to change our climate :)))) Norway is very cold at the moment
:)) Haribol
Hehehehe...That is nice....It is quite sunny here. :)
ReplyDeletenice one...rahul....:-)
ReplyDeleteHi Deekay,
ReplyDeleteI am glad you liked it.
Thanks. :)